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Welcome![edit]

Hello, Dgallery, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:49, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Dgallery, two weeks into the semester and you haven't made a single edit. That's not a good sign. Dr Aaij (talk) 00:20, 30 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Now five weeks into the semester. Dr Aaij (talk) 02:28, 19 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ms Gallery, your draft was late (yesterday), and you hadn't posted the link on my talk page, so I'm not surprised there's no reviews of it, but there will be one in a minute. Dr Aaij (talk) 00:58, 3 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

A kitten for you![edit]

Meow--good job! Keep writing.

Dr Aaij (talk) 16:54, 8 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Looks great so far - definitely keep mining for sourcing for Bush, but the article looks good so far! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:25, 9 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • I made a lot of small edits to the article--I'm surprised that I had to do this, but you didn't do anything for five days. Your nomination template likewise needs copyedits: it needs a question mark at the end, for starters, but also, I mentioned you should put her dates in there. Dr Aaij (talk) 00:50, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ms. Gallery, you have made no edits in 8 days. There are zeroes for four different assignments. Dr Aaij (talk) 21:42, 23 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice that the page you created, Template:Did you know nominations/Bibb Graves bridge, was tagged as a test page under section G2 of the criteria for speedy deletion and has been or soon may be deleted. Please use the sandbox for any other tests you want to do. Take a look at the welcome page if you would like to learn more about contributing to our encyclopedia.

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Myrtle Brooke[edit]

Hi! I have some notes for your article and DYK hook:

  • This needs more sourcing to back up the claims, as right now it's only sourced with a single source. This may end up preventing it from progressing at DYK, to be honest.
  • The hook also needs to be a bit more compact and catchier. Maybe something like this:
"...that Myrtle Brooke was inducted into the Alabama Women's Hall of Fame for her work in education, social work, and for creating the state's first social work curriculum?"
  • The hook claims that Brooke was the dean of the University of Montevallo, but this isn't in the source used in the article. Keep in mind that there are a lot of different terms for leaders within the educational system and you should use whatever term was specifically used to describe her. The UoM website doesn't use the term dean, instead using the term Chairperson, so I'd use that when describing her role. The reason why this needs to be specified is because chairpersons and deans are not the same thing - a chairperson may be one of the higher or highest positions in a department, but could still end up reporting to a dean that manages several departments at once.

I'm going to tag your professor (Dr Aaji) to see if he has any suggestions for the hook. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:56, 8 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

DYK nomination of Dorothy Vredenburgh Bush[edit]

Hello! Your submission of Dorothy Vredenburgh Bush at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Yoninah (talk) 12:22, 9 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Incomplete DYK nomination[edit]

Hello! Your submission of Template:Did you know nominations/Myrtle Brooke at the Did You Know nominations page is not complete; if you would like to continue, please link the nomination to the nominations page as described in step 3 of the nomination procedure. If you do not want to continue with the nomination, tag the nomination page with {{db-g7}}, or ask a DYK admin. Thank you. DYKHousekeepingBot (talk) 16:22, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Dr Aaij - is the student still interested in this? The article could use some more sourcing, but I do think that Brooke would make for an interesting DYK hook. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:39, 12 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • I'm not sure, Shalor. I'll have another look. Thanks... Dr Aaij (talk) 21:13, 14 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Dorothy Vredenburgh Bush[edit]

On 6 December 2018, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Dorothy Vredenburgh Bush, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Dorothy Vredenburgh Bush was the first woman to call roll for the Democratic National Convention, doing so for 12 straight conventions? You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Dorothy Vredenburgh Bush), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

Vanamonde (talk) 12:02, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination for deletion of Template:Did you know nominations/Myrtle Brooke[edit]

Template:Did you know nominations/Myrtle Brooke has been nominated for deletion. You are invited to comment on the discussion at the template's entry on the Templates for discussion page. Dr Aaij (talk) 21:09, 17 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

A page you started (The Performance of Becoming Human) has been reviewed![edit]

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