User talk:DigitalIdentityProject19/Ice hockey in Switzerland
The variety of players is good, but only surface information is given about them. Maybe just focus on a couple and go further in depth about where the player is from, how old they were when they joined professional Swiss hockey, and further background on their development as a hockey player and the path they took in their careers until now. Otherwise, the actual amount of information given is minimal and would not be very sufficient to someone who was actually curious about these players. Also add some hyperlinks to other Wikipedia articles.