User talk:E.Loomis
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Suyá music article[edit]
Overall, very good. Just some minor details. I would recommend putting foreign words in italics. I think your discussion is very good, but it is a little hard to follow. You might want to introduce the idea that there are two genres first, and then explain what they are or some other type of organization. Other notes:
- structuralizations is not a word
- "resitricted to men": should explain why
- you might want to mention breifly that instruments are only used to accompany vocal music (or explain why you are only talking about vocal music)
- the title of the section seems odd. Maybe, "musical structure", "musical form", something like that? You might want to check other music articles to get ideas. Nposs (talk) 14:51, 10 November 2009 (UTC)