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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
TeamRocketCarbon (talk)For starters, grid defection is good point to include when it comes to the subject of home energy storage, being a notable, relevant and important issue. However, there were some errors within sources and references, as well as in the tone & balance. Source #10, from EnergyTransition.org, is not a reliable source to include in a Wikipedia article. It's not a professional research article and is more similar to an op-ed. Additionally, using a source with the website being named "EnergyTransition.org" may not be viable as the author has inherent biases towards the energy industry and the direction it should be going. Furthermore, in Wikipedia, you also used a quote from this site. I'm not confident that direct quotes are allowed (maybe we're wrong) but be careful to paraphrase and use your own words. It would be advisable that Source #10 and its content be cut and replaced with a different source. Everything else was great though adding a Grid Defection section to Advantages to balance out the negativity could be useful in maintaining a neutral point of view on a nuanced subject.TeamRocketCarbon (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 19:39, 9 October 2024 (UTC)