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Your submission at Articles for creation: Corey Calliet (November 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There's no significance or substance here to establish notability, simply too soon in his career. The last section is also blatantly advertising and therefore unacceptable!

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 06:46, 15 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Corey Calliet

Hello, Efemjee. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Corey Calliet".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 18:31, 22 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Regis Prograis has been accepted

Regis Prograis, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Hitro talk 14:18, 21 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jay Jones (October 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Fails WP: NMUSICIAN, lacks significant coverage in multiple independent reliable secondary sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Dan arndt (talk) 00:21, 7 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Efemjee! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dan arndt (talk) 00:21, 7 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jay Jones (rapper) (October 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft was resubmitted with only minimal improvement after being declined by User:Dan arndt, but it still does not appear to satisfy musical notability, and is being declined again. If this draft is resubmitted again with only minimal improvement (again), it will be declined again, and possibly nominated for deletion, unless an explanation is provided on the draft talk page, Draft talk: Jay Jones (rapper), of how musical notability is satisfied.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:23, 7 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

October 2018 Reply

Apologies for not responding earlier. In respect to your request for advice on Draft:Jay Jones (rapper) the main issue relates to the sources provided. The first reference to Young Money Entertainment is what is considered a primary source as YME is the company promoting Jay Jones and therefore is not considered an independent source. The second reference to the South Florida Times is an acceptable reliable reference. The third reference to Complex Media appears to be a reliable independent source, whilst the fourth reference is just a lyrics site and carries no weight whatsoever.

In respect to content the draft article uses a lot of weasel words, such as "music mogul", "a legend in the New Orleans rap genre" and "studio baby", which are seen as an attempt to puff up the importance of the statement - you need to keep any statements factual and objective.

Finally in the Discography you need to separate Jones' releases (as a solo artist) from those where he just appears on the song by another artist. You need to remove the links from the titles to iTunes, Spotify, Datpiff and YouTube as direct links are actively discouraged and iTunes and YouTube are not considered acceptable, independent reliable sources anyway. I would personally cut the Videography section unless you have supporting references (not YouTube) as to his roles in those videos.

Let me know if you need any further advice - happy editing. Dan arndt (talk) 02:46, 9 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Corey Calliet

Hello, Efemjee. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Corey Calliet".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Phospheros (talk) 00:58, 23 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Jay Jones (rapper)

Hello, Efemjee. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jay Jones".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Dolotta (talk) 04:44, 25 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]