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I've tagged a few spots that I think could use a source or two, though you've done a good job sourcing overall. I'm not familiar enough with notability standards for this type of article to say anything in that direction. There are a few spots like this - "This application is useful for people who are using a fitness training regime, or who want to reach performance goals." that seem to read like advertising but should take just minor editing to be okay.

After you make these minor changes, imho it is ready to be moved into article space. --Philosopher Let us reason together. 21:08, 17 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I see you've already copied it to mainspace. I'm re-making these changes to the article. --Philosopher Let us reason together. 21:17, 17 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]