User talk:Eliash520/sandbox

Prof Garcia's Comments

Week 6: Eliase, you have to continue researching your topic more. I was expecting for you to add more substantial content to your page during week 6, but all you did was add a sentence. What happened? Make sure to stay on top of this all. Alfgarciamora (talk)

@Eliash520: You are really falling behind, Eliase. What you added to the mainspace was insufficient and not well-researched. You have a lot of catching up to do in order to pass this assignment, so please get in touch with me directly if you would like help. Alfgarciamora (talk) 19:11, 4 November 2016 (UTC)

Sara's Notes

Hey there! I agree with the professor on this, there is no extra work simply just your sources. It would be awesome to maybe even see the beginning of your topics and sub-topics. For example a header that firstly explains what types of social groups/circles are in the world that exists. List them down if you have too, and then add information under them on why they are there. Like which stereotype allowed those social groups to form. What affects they have on the people in the group, why they effect then in such a way. I see you have a source on social health. Explain in another sub topic on why these social groups effect ones health, and how they can better their health as well. Details are everything! I need more information to honestly help you edit your page. Help me to help you, hahaha! Good Luck! Sfern200

Thank you for your help I was hesitant in beginning to get into the draft when i couldn't find as many sources as i would've liked. I'm going to use your suggestions to help me putting everything together. Eliash520 —Preceding undated comment added 18:32, 25 October 2016 (UTC)