User talk:Ellyperlowitz
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Hello, Ellyperlowitz, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:59, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
Hi Elly,
The first thing I noticed you might want to change is adding citations and links to other wikipedia pages. It looks like so far you have developed a clear, organized outline that you will add onto more soon, so I will not critique any lack of content. One topic I might consider adding to your outline if I were you would be government interaction with Morocco's agriculture. I think you could draw add a lot of information by considering things such as whether certain Moroccan crops are subsidized, what trade regulations are imposed on Moroccan foods, and whether there are laws regarding humane treatment of animals. Another topic I think is worth considering is how other cultures may have affected Moroccan cuisine and agriculture, like how we were learning about how American demand for quinoa really affected the food in countries that grow quinoa. I think that your other topics all sound very interesting and could make for a well structured article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SDoroba (talk • contribs) 02:37, 3 November 2016 (UTC)
Hi!
Thanks for the edits and construction. I'll be sure to think through these moving forward. Much appreciated!