User talk:Erinbails/sandbox
Feedback from Bailey to Adriana: Our lead section needs revising to become a better introduction to the article and outline of the main point. I found that Wikipedia's lead section directions were helpful. The descriptions for our list of keys figures is incomplete. We can work on how we want to order these once they are complete. Lastly, we are missing more recent advancements or events for feminism in Argentina (like we decided you were be in charge of). Other than those things, we are in good shape!
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