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** BONUS ** (one EXTRA point!) - Rachelma114
Hi Professor, below is the feelings about Wikipedia course. ////1. What my experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment: My experience in this Wikipedia course is reaaaly great. I could apply what I learned in the RPM class into practical edits. That's really cool! It's a really great journey that I not only have fun making edits in Wikipedia but also I learned a lot of techniques and skills in terms of how to cite and edit. //// 2. What I learned. I got to know how to review an article in the aspects of content, tone, sources and talk. I learned how to make edits from reliable sources, restate the sentences from papers, add citations and references. What's most important, I learned to show respect to others‘ edits and to review the articles in an objective way. And I learned to "stand on the shoulders of giants", which is how to cite other's research in the proper way. And I learned how to add pictures to Wikipedia, which is also my favorite part. ---- //// 3. Why / why not I intend to continue editing on Wikipedia: I would like to continue editing on Wikipedia after this class. For me, it's really a great chance where I could learn and have fun at the same time. Before this class, I thought edits articles is a little boring. But after this class, all this kind of feelings disappeared! I found my interest in research, and I would like to continue learning research skills in the future. Thank you, Professor! Best regards, --Rachelma114 (talk) 01:53, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for sharing this Rachelma114. I hope you maintain editing Wikipedia when this is finished! --- FULBERT (talk) 02:29, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
Week 6 Introduction to Creative Commons qhdud12
Hi professor, here is a link to an article that I added a photo to: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Korean_beauty_standards&action=history Thanks! Qhdud12 (talk) 04:59, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- It seems the image you uploaded may have already been removed due to no copyright for it. Remember, you can only upload images you take or otherwise have the copyright to upload Qhdud12. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:33, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
** BONUS ** (one EXTRA point!) qhdud12
1. What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment.
Wikipedia assignment was challenging but interesting. I've only used Wikipedia for research never made contributions to it. In the beginning, it was little difficult to figure out how to edit the article, add a photo and even use our talk page. It was also interesting how everyone works collaboratively to edit and sign so others can know you've made changes. Overall, it was an unique experience.
What you learned.
I learned that it is very difficult to cite and add a photo to the article. The citation requires a lot of information about the resources. It was also very difficult to find photos that are freely used and does not require license. I've never imagined that it was going to be difficult to do those.
Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia.
I will continue to edit the articles since I've learned how to. If I see mistakes or find places that need more information, I will contribute and make edits. I will also keep watching the articles that I find an interest in. Qhdud12 (talk) 05:09, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for sharing your feedback Qhdud12 on this, and I hope you continue to edit Wikipedia! --- FULBERT (talk) 01:34, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
Week 6 - Yq712
Dear professor, I choose option B: edit two more articles. The two new articles I picked are Alex Honnold and Elizabeth Chai Vasarhelyi. I added one sentences with references to both of the articles. Here is the edit history: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Alex_Honnold&action=history and https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Elizabeth_Chai_Vasarhelyi&action=history -Yq712 (talk) 06:27, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- Interesting edits Yq712; they were both already improved upon! --- FULBERT (talk) 01:36, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
Bonus Questions
What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment. Overall the experience with this Wikipedia course assignment is great. Before doing the assignment, I've never thought about edit Wikipedia articles and didn't know how to do it. I learned a lot about how the articles are built, and how I can contribute to articles.
What you learned. I learned how Wikipedia see plagiarize and copyright. I realized it is simple to edit Wikipedia articles, but people have to follow many rules in order to make sure the editing is correct.
Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia. I may continue editing on Wikipedia. If I found some mistakes or some articles I could add details, I will continue contributing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yq712 (talk • contribs) 06:36, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for your thoughts on this Yq712 ; remember to sign edits on the Talk: page! I hope you continue with this once the course ends!! --- FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
Week 5 - Gl1147
Hi Professor, I edited 2 more articles this week. For Razer Inc., I updated a product designed by this company that was just released yesterday. For Amazon Web Services, I added a section called "Pricing" that gives readers an overview of how AWS products and services are charged. Gl1147 (talk) 01:08, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- I combined your text here to save space. Both the articles you edited made reference right back to the companies themselves, and it is not a reliable use of references to cite a company's desciption of itself in support of a claim. Can you find other, reliable third party sources to substantiate their own claims to add onto those edits Gl1147? Please add them and then ping me again here. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:20, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- I fixed the Razer article by using a 3rd party reference. However for the AWS article, I think using reference from the company itself would be the most appropriate when it comes to the pricing of its own products. The reference link that I used provides the most comprehensive list of all services that AWS has to offer along with most accurate and detailed pricing information for each service. Let me know if you disagree. --- Gl1147 (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
- People and companies always have their own biases when talking about their abilities, capabilities, offerings, or values, [User:Gl1147|Gl1147]]. Even when not intended, it is hard to be objective or critical when speaking about oneself. As a result, all resources on Wikipedia are instructed to follow the policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. We almost always run into problems when we trust companies to tell about themselves and we accept it without questioning it or asking for others to confirm our understanding is accurate. Can you find another source to add to it to show somebody else in a credible role agrees with that, too? --- FULBERT (talk) 01:42, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
- The references for my edits in the AWS article have been changed to 3rd party. --- Gl1147 (talk) 11:02, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
- I am not sure those other sources are sufficient yet, but they are enough to give other editors something to work with Gl1147. Great! --- FULBERT (talk) 12:25, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
- The references for my edits in the AWS article have been changed to 3rd party. --- Gl1147 (talk) 11:02, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
- People and companies always have their own biases when talking about their abilities, capabilities, offerings, or values, [User:Gl1147|Gl1147]]. Even when not intended, it is hard to be objective or critical when speaking about oneself. As a result, all resources on Wikipedia are instructed to follow the policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. We almost always run into problems when we trust companies to tell about themselves and we accept it without questioning it or asking for others to confirm our understanding is accurate. Can you find another source to add to it to show somebody else in a credible role agrees with that, too? --- FULBERT (talk) 01:42, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
- I fixed the Razer article by using a 3rd party reference. However for the AWS article, I think using reference from the company itself would be the most appropriate when it comes to the pricing of its own products. The reference link that I used provides the most comprehensive list of all services that AWS has to offer along with most accurate and detailed pricing information for each service. Let me know if you disagree. --- Gl1147 (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
WEEK6_JIAYU ZUO
Hi Professor, here is the article that I edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autumn. And here is the image that I inserted:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autumn#/media/File:Halloween_pumpkins.jpg. Thank you!!--Jiayu Zuo (talk) 06:08, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
- Nice image you uploaded and inserted into the article Jiayu Zuo. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:15, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
Hello, prof. Please see the links for my work: article 1 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Big_data&action=history ;article 2 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Credit_score&action=history Thanks Bunny233 (talk) 18:31, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
- Both of these edits are useful for these articles Bunny233. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:27, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
Hello, prof. I chose to insert a picture for this assignment and here's link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Volcano&action=history Thank you. Bunny233 (talk) 19:07, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
- Great addition, which has subsequently been further edited Bunny233. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:31, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
It was hard for me at the beginning since I was completely new to the wiki editing. I mean I'm still a newbie but feel much more comfortable with the editing tools. These trainings are so helpful and they literally guided me through everything that I need to know. Through the six-week sessions, I get to know how to add contents and citations correctly as well as the media. I will keep editing in the future because it makes me feel good that my contributions can make the world a better place by simply sharing my knowledge and ideas. Thank you for having this great idea as the extra point to the course. Bunny233 (talk) 19:19, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback on this Bunny233, and I hope you continue editing Wikipedia in the future. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:32, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
week 6 (yt1416)
hi professor, I shared a photo of Chengdu I took on the Wikimedia commons and uploaded in the wikipedia page. Here's the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chengdu&action=history please check--Yt1416 (talk) 18:38, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
- Nice pic, though it was already moved by another editor. I added a category for it in Wiki Commons Yt1416. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:38, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
This week's article for improvement (week 50, 2018)
Nuuk is the capital and largest city of Greenland. Pictured is the Nuussuaq district in Nuuk, with Sermitsiaq mountain in the background.
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December 19: WikiWednesday Salon and Skill-Share NYC
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This week's article for improvement (week 51, 2018)
![]() A bookworm / beetle grub found inside a paperback book, showing some of the damage it has wrought
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This week's article for improvement (week 52, 2018)
![]() A diagram that includes the scalp
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The Signpost: 24 December 2018
- From the editors: Where to draw the line in reporting?
- News and notes: Some wishes do come true
- In the media: Political hijinks
- Discussion report: A new record low for RfA
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This week's article for improvement (week 1, 2018)
![]() Poster for a production of Boucicault's farce Contempt of Court, c. 1879. From the Library of Congress.
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January 13: Wikimedia NYC invites you to Wikipedia Day 2019
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This week's article for improvement (week 2, 2019)
![]() An example of page orientation: a smartphone positioned upright (portrait orientation) and horizontally (landscape orientation)
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This week's article for improvement (week 3, 2019)
![]() Vicki Gunvalson in 2009
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This week's article for improvement (week 4, 2019)
A view of the Quetschenfest street fair in the community of Geichlingen, Germany
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This week's article for improvement (week 5, 2019)
Hello, FULBERT.
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This Month in Education: January 2019
The Signpost: 31 January 2019
- Op-Ed: Random Rewards Rejected
- News and notes: WMF staff turntable continues to spin; Endowment gets more cash; RfA continues to be a pit of steely knives
- Discussion report: The future of the reference desk
- Featured content: Don't miss your great opportunity
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Introduce myself-assignment Week 1, Xicong Liu
Hi, my name is Xicong Liu. I am from the South of China, Shenzhen. I completed my undergraduate degree at Shenzhen University. This is my second semester in NYU. I lived in Long Island City which is convenient to take class in midtown center. I never take such course before,especially writing English research paper, it is totally new for me. After taken two classes this week, I found that I really like this course with the humorous and helpful professor. This course is a challenge to me, but I believe that I can conquer it. The Chinese New Year and Spring Festival is coming next week. Happy Chinese New Year!! --Xicong Liu (talk) 01:40, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to Wikipedia Xicong Liu. I hope you find this experience useful and, even more, an experience that invites you to think about knowledge and information differently. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:26, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 1, Assignment 4, Caryliu1020
My name is Chengkai Liu, but most people call me Cary. I graduated from The University of Alabama with Finance major concentrated on Investment Management and Computing Tech & Applications minor. This is my second semester in NYU. My concentration for this program is Enterprise Risk Management (ERM), because I do not like risk, and I hope that the uncertainty can be in my control. I like sleeping, reading fictions, listening to music and watching dramas. – Caryliu1020 (talk) 04:18, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to Wikipedia Caryliu1020. May you find that positive change has its own risks, and the more we can try to be fair and open and helpful, the more we reduce risks for the majority! --- FULBERT (talk) 18:33, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
This week's article for improvement (week 6, 2019)
![]() A typical Finnish school meal lunch, served free of charge to all pupils.
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Week 1, Assignment 4, self-introduction, rg2493
Hi, my name is rg2493. I graduated from CUNY Baruch College in New York City. I've been living in NYC for 5 years and I really like this city. I used to move around frequently with my parents and have lived in different cities. This experience made me a person who loves traveling and changes. I've been to Japan, Korea, Russia, Australia, New Zealand, Canada, Porto Rico, and Singapore. I always enjoy the type of travel where I can experience the local life rather than pure tourism. I believe experiencing the life in a completely different place and culture will make myself a wise person with a broader view.Rg2493 (talk) 20:24, 4 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to Wikipedia Rg2493. I sincerely hope you are right about gaining wisdom through experiencing other cultures, as there are few other ways for us to become aware of our own assumptions than be experiencing them within the mores of difference. I hope you bring that fresh set of eyes to your work here! --- FULBERT (talk) 04:40, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
assignment 4 / week 1, Olive00
Hello, my name is Olive and I come from Shenzhen, China. I graduated from Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications. My major was E-Commerce Engineering with Law. It is my first year in NYU. My concentration is System Management. I have learned many things that I never heard before so I am really happy about that. I really enjoyed the life in New York. I can live without my parents’ restriction. I can do whatever I want and nobody cares. I hope that I can find a summer intern in New York. Olive00 (talk) 16:28, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
- Glad you are enjoying New York, but try not to do simply anything just because you can. Then again, now is your time to learn! Welcome to Wikipedia Olive00. ---FULBERT (talk) 19:55, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
Week One, Assignment 4, IRISCYY
Hello, My name is Iris. I am from Shenzhen, China. I graduated from Newcastle University and was majored in Business Management. My concentration is Enterprise Risk Management. My internship experience draw my interest about ERM so here I am. I might have a little bit of background about research since I took a course called research methodology in Newcastle University. I like travelling, learning different languages, and playing guitar.IRISCYY (talk) 16:59, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to Wikipedia, from one person who studied in the north of England to another IRISCYY. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:56, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 1, Assignment 4, Shenshi0603
Hello guys, my name is Shi Shen and I am from Zhengzhou, China. I graduated from College of St. Benedict & St. John's University in Minnesota with Accounting & Finance major and Japanese minor. And I studied abroad in Japan when I was junior. This is my second semester in NYU and I am in the Database Technology concentration. I had one year working experience as an Illustrator in an anime studio because I started drawing since I was a child. However, it is challenging to make a hobby into a business, so I am considering what I will do when I graduate from this program. I like playing basketball, playing video games, and collecting sneakers.Shenshi0603 (talk) 14:38, 6 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to NYC and also to Wikipedia Shenshi0603. There are always interesting niches available for people with varied skills, so keep focused on your passions and see how they take you to unexpected, engaging opportunities. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:00, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
Week1, Assignment 4, Luojiefu
My name is Luojiefu. I'm from Guangzhou, China. I graduated from The George Washington University in Washington, DC., majoring Finance and minoring Economics. This is my second semester in NYU SPS. My concentration is database technology. I worked for China Telecom Americas as a price analyst last year in Herdon, Virginia. Currently, I am looking for a summer internship in New York or DMV area(DC, MD, VA).Luojiefu (talk) 00:34, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to Wikipedia and NYC Luojiefu. I hope the more you explore, the more you will find them both places with almost limitless opportunities! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:02, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
Week1, Assignment 4, Naiyu Tian
My name is Naiyu, Tian. I graduate from a university in China, majoring in business related field. This is my second semester in NYU SPS. My concentration is database. In the next month, I hope I could visit Puerto Rico and Miami in Florida State. And undoubtedly, I also want to have the opportunity to find an internship here. Naiyu Tian (talk) 01:45, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to Wikipedia Naiyu Tian. I hope you find opportunities in Wikipedia that may lead to new ways of exploring! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:05, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
This week's article for improvement (week 7, 2019)
![]() Pondicherry is the capital and the most populous city of the Indian Union Territory of Puducherry.
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week 1, assignment 4, Ashley
Hello, my name is Ashley,I come from northeast of China. I graduated from the University of South Dakota. My major was finance. I moved to New York at 2017 because of the job. I was an accounting analyst in a commercial real estate. In my free time, I like travelling, listening music, going to the gym and taking pictures. I Like travelling by myself. I used to travel Europe by myself. I always think it is interesting to meet different things when you travel. And I really like recording these moment. I hope I can find a job that related to finance analyst this summer. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ashleyatnyu (talk--Ashleyatnyu (talk) 23:17, 7 February 2019 (UTC) • contribs) 19:46, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
- This was not signed Ashleyatnyu. Please reply to me here and sign it per the course online learning module that shows you how to do it. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:58, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
- I will sign this here Ashleyatnyu (talk) 02:40, 8 February 2019 (UTC)
- Great Ashleyatnyu. All in order now. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:37, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
- I will sign this here Ashleyatnyu (talk) 02:40, 8 February 2019 (UTC)
Week2, Assignment#3, Xicong Liu
Hi, good evening! This is the link of article in my sandbox. User_talk:Xicong_Liu/sandbox#Article_evaluation Thank you.--Xicong Liu (talk) 03:20, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
- This looks great Xicong Liu. You should be ready to begin editing soon! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:39, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, check-in message for sandbox, rg2493
Hi Fulbert. This is rg2493. Please see the link for my sandbox article review, thank you! Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rg2493/sandbox Rg2493 (talk) 03:39, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
- This looks great Rg2493. You should be ready to begin editing soon! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:42, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, Caryliu1020
Sandbox Article Evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Caryliu1020/sandbox#Article_Evaluation
—Caryliu1020 (talk) 04:41, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
- This looks nicely detailed Caryliu1020. You should be ready to begin editing soon! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:44, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, Shenshi0603
Hi, here is the link of my sandbox article review. Thank you very much.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Shenshi0603/sandboxShenshi0603 (talk) 19:18, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
- This looks fine Shenshi0603. You should be ready to begin editing soon! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:46, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, Ashley
Hi, here is the link of my sandbox article review. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Ashleyatnyu/sandbox Thank you.--Ashleyatnyu (talk) 23:42, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
- This looks fine Ashleyatnyu. You should be ready to begin editing soon! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:47, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, Luojiefu
Hi, this is my article evaluation https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Luojiefu/sandboxLuojiefu (talk) 20:19, 11 February 2019 (UTC)
- Can you please link to the article you reviewed in your Sandbox, and then ping me here when you are done Luojiefu? --- FULBERT (talk) 19:49, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 1, Assignment 4, Tgs847
Hello class, my name is Jackson and I am from Shanghai, China. I went to Pennsylvania State University for my undergraduate majored in Organizational Behavior Management. When I was in undergraduate, I took many Finance classes and felt my true interest lies there. Even though I did not get a Finance degree because the department did not allow me to, I have finished all the classes under Finance major. I came to NYU to further my study in the finance-related area and I wanted to learn something practical, so I decided to take database technology concentration. Very glad that I have the opportunity to be in this class with everyone, and hope we can all enjoy our time here. ---- Tgs847 (talk) 21:31, 11 February 2019 (UTC)Tgs847
- Welcome to the world of open and freely available knowledge Tgs847. May you find it more interesting once you start working on it than you ever imagined before you started. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:51, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, Olive00
This is the link to my Sandbox article review: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Olive00/sandbox Thank you!Olive00 (talk) 05:50, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
- This looks fine Olive00. You should be ready to begin editing soon! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:53, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, Naiyu Tian
Hi!Professor, here is the link of my sandbox article for you to review: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kurtspiel/sandbox Thanks for the feedback! Naiyu Tian (talk) 04:26, 13 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the update Naiyu Tian. Looks like you are ready to edit. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:05, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 1, Assignment 4, Dw2460
Hi, My name is Dw2460, and I comes from Qingdao, China. I graduated from Stony Brook University, and my major was Economics. I have a Corgi in China and his name is Wangcai. Since he raised up with my sister's rabbits in my front yard, he always jump around with my sister's rabbits. When he was 5 months old, he finally realized he is different with the rabbits because he was a lot bigger than the rabbits and eats more. Wangcai is a really funny dog, and I really love him. Dw2460 (talk) 23:57, 13 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to the world of Wikipedia editing Dw2460. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:20, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
week 1, assignment 4, Heying Wang
Hello, this is Heying Wang. I am from China, and I graduated from University of Iowa and now study in New York University SPS Program. --8023kk (talk) 00:41, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
- Welcome to Wikipedia, 8023kk. I hope you find it an interesting experience! BTW, I am not sure why ZhiZhi Xu added a review here, so I removed it. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:26, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 1, Assignment 4, Maomao Yi
Hello, this is Maomao! I come from Shanghai, China. I graduated from Shanghai University of International Business and Economics. I have one year experience in Bank of Communication Credit Card Center as a fraud analyst. I love my job so i want to learn more. So, i entered this program and hoped to learn data analysis. I'm glad to make friends so make free to talk with me. I knew i'm not that good at writing paper so i want to improve my skills in this class.My hobby is taking photos and i'm trying to make some interesting vlogs recently. Here is my youtube channel: Maomao- record my life --Maoyi.95 (talk) 15:41, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
- I hope some of the Wikipedia editing skills you gain here will serve you in your professional pursuits as well Maoyi.95! --- FULBERT (talk) 21:30, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, assignment 3, IRISCYY
Hi, this is my article evaluation link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IRISCYY/sandbox Thank you.---IRISCYY (talk) 04:55, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- Please fix the link to the Wikipedia article you reviewed on your Sandbox page and reping me. Also, you have a few typos there, so fix them and I will review it IRISCYY. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:34, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. I have fixed those mistakes.---IRISCYY (talk) 21:48, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you IRISCYY. This all seems in order now. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:52, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. I have fixed those mistakes.---IRISCYY (talk) 21:48, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 3, Assignment 3, Article title: color psychology, rg2493
Hi Fulbert, I've done some minor edits about the meanings of the red color in the chart. Please see the link for my copyedited article. Thank you. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Color_psychology Rg2493 (talk) 05:12, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- This looks fine Rg2493. Great first edit. --- FULBERT (talk) 17:47, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
week 1-Assignment 4- Zi XU
Hi, everyone! I am Zi XU. I graduated from University of Minnesota, Twin Cities. I really like New York, so I come to NYU, and major in Management and System. I hope i will have a good time in this graduate school.--192.76.177.125 (talk) 18:05, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- Please see my email ZhiZhi Xu that I sent you off wiki for next steps before I review. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:40, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- This should be all fine at this point ZhiZhi Xu. Welcome to Wikipedia! --- FULBERT (talk) 18:12, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
week3, assignment 3, Olive00, fix the grammatical error
Hello, here is the link: --Internet Plus The previous sentence has an grammatical error and I correct it. I make it more coherent.Olive00 (talk) 22:11, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- This appears a helpful fix Olive00. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:35, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, assignment 3, Maomao Yi
Hi Fulbert. This is Maomao. Please see the link for my sandbox article review, thank you! Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maoyi.95/sandbox. --Maoyi.95 (talk) 22:15, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- I moved the banner to the top of your page, but otherwise this is fine Maoyi.95. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:46, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week3, Assignment#3, Xicong Liu, the history self-driving car
This is the link of copy-edited article: self-driving car.
-I have added the first known thoughts about self-driving car in the late 1950s more detailed.
-Correct the time of first self-driving cars become a reality.
-Added the prototype of driverless car of Google Car in 2010.
All the edited part above include citation.Thanks. --Xicong Liu (talk) 19:51, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- Please see my off wiki email to you, and ping me here when the request I made is complete Xicong Liu. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:48, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- This is the new link of the comparison of copy-edited article: self-driving car I have corrected some punctuations and grammar problem. Thanks for reminding. I will avoid making the same mistake next time.--Xicong Liu (talk) 00:31, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the overall edits; much clearer now for this step Xicong Liu. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- This is the new link of the comparison of copy-edited article: self-driving car I have corrected some punctuations and grammar problem. Thanks for reminding. I will avoid making the same mistake next time.--Xicong Liu (talk) 00:31, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 3, Assignment 3, Luojiefu
Hi, I updated a current roster for my favorite basketball team from my hometown, Guangdong Southern Tigers. Here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guangdong_Southern_Tigers#Current_roster Luojiefu (talk) 03:37, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Please fix the article you assigned yourself in the Wiki Edu dashboard, and ping me here. Then I will review your change Luojiefu. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:53, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 1, Assignment 4, Yifei Zhao
Hi, I am Yifei Zhao. I come from Shanghai, China. I graduated from Suffolk University in Boston, Massachusetts. I was major in accounting. Then, I came to New York. I really like this city. Here is my sandbox's link. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Lydia0730/sandbox&redirect=no&veaction=edit&action=edit Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lydia0730 (talk • contribs) 00:20, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
- You did not sign this Lydia0730. Please reply here and sign it and then ping me to take another look. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:22, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
--Lydia0730 (talk) 23:08, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Sorry, Prof, I didn't sign when I post my assignment. And I figure out how to sign now.--Lydia0730 (talk) 23:09, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment 3, Yifei Zhao
Hi, here is the article review in my sandbox link. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lydia0730/sandbox Please check it, thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lydia0730 (talk • contribs) 01:34, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
- Please remember to sign your replies Lydia0730. Reply here with your signature and ping me, and then I will take a look at your assignment. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:29, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
Prof. I have sign now. Please check my assignment, and here is the article review in my sandbox.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lydia0730/sandbox
Thank you.--Lydia0730 (talk) 23:13, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2-Assignment 3, Zi Xu
Hi, everyone. I am Zi Xu. Here is my sandbox link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZhiZhi_Xu/sandbox Thank you very much!--ZhiZhi Xu (talk) 02:40, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- I condensed your feedback into a smaller amount of space. This overall looks fine ZhiZhi Xu. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you!ZhiZhi Xu (talk) 23:31, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
This week's article for improvement (week 8, 2019)
![]() Mixian rice noodles being cooked on a gas stove at a noodle restaurant in Kunming, Yunnan, China
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week 3 assignment 3, Ashley
Hello Professor, this is the link that I edited https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diversity_(business)#Challenges I added a citation for the cultural diversity in the workplace from my research paper readings. --Ashleyatnyu (talk) 08:57, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Please assign yourself the topic on the Wiki Edu dashboard as requested in the assignment, and ping me here and I will take a look at it Ashleyatnyu. --- FULBERT (talk) 17:42, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Hello professor, I already assigned my topic on the Wiki Edu dashboard. Please check,thank you. --Ashleyatnyu (talk) 19:02, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you Ashleyatnyu; I see what you added and refined it slightly. Take a look at my edit on that article as well. ---FULBERT (talk) 01:02, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
- Hello professor, I already assigned my topic on the Wiki Edu dashboard. Please check,thank you. --Ashleyatnyu (talk) 19:02, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 3, Assignment 3, Caryliu1020
Article Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender_inequality
Title: Improving Content in 1.2 Psychology of Gender Inequality
Summary of Edits: →Psychology: Gender role expectations and stereotypes are reasons that males and females are led on different paths. This change improves the content, and it serves as a connecting link between the preceding and the following.
—Caryliu1020 (talk) 20:15, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Useful edits to this topic of very current interest Caryliu1020 --- FULBERT (talk) 01:09, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 2, Assignment #3, Tgs847
Hey, Good Evening! Here is the link to my sandbox about the article I reviewed. Thanks! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tgs847/sandbox#Article_Evaluation -- Tgs847 (talk) 23:38, 17 February 2019 (UTC)Tgs847
- Great review of this article Tgs847. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:17, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 3, Assignment #3, Tgs847
Hello, here is the article which I did some minor fixes: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timeline_of_artificial_intelligence#To_1900 I added two citations to validate the claims about Aristotle described the thought of syllogism, and mathematician Bernard Bolzano made the first modern attempt to formalize semantics. Thanks! --Tgs847 (talk) 01:00, 18 February 2019 (UTC)Tgs847
- Good additions that were already further refined and revised after your edits Tgs847, --- FULBERT (talk) 01:20, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 3, assignment 3, Dw2460
Hi, FULBERT. Here is the link of my article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amazon_(company). Edit summary: I added a link to the word "apparel". People who are learning English may not know apparel refers to clothing. Thank you! --Dw2460 (talk) 01:02, 18 February 2019 (UTC)
- Great point Dw2460. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:24, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
Week 3, Assignment 3, IRISCYY
Hi, this is the link of my copy-edited article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Work%E2%80%93family_conflict#Role_of_gender ---IRISCYY (talk) 22:18, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
- Please assign yourself the article via the instructions in the assignment on the Wiki Edu dashboard, and ping me here again IRISCYY. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:51, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for your reply. I have assgined myself on the Wiki Edu dashboard.---IRISCYY (talk) 21:31, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- Interesting study you found. Nice contribution IRISCYY. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:25, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for your reply. I have assgined myself on the Wiki Edu dashboard.---IRISCYY (talk) 21:31, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
Week3, Assignment#3, Zi Xu
Hi, I am Zi Xu. Here is the wiki link which I edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Population_ageing I add the Chinese translation of the "population aging", and I adjust some grammars also. Thank you very much!ZhiZhi Xu (talk) 05:08, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
- I condensed this reply of yours as well. Assign yourself this article per the assignment in the Wiki Edu dashboard as per the assignment, and ping me again and I will take a look ZhiZhi Xu. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
I did not very clear about your reply. Should I change this assignment or i did wrong with this assignment? Thank you very much!ZhiZhi Xu (talk) 23:33, 17 February 2019 (UTC) Hi, I have already assigned my topic on the Wiki Edu dashboard. Please check.Thank you.ZhiZhi Xu (talk) 02:43, 18 February 2019 (UTC)
- This is fine as-is. Nice addition ZhiZhi Xu. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:28, 20 February 2019 (UTC)