User talk:Faata Rizantara/sandbox

Here are some feedbacks, good luck!

Maybe you can even up the format for the history of the previous student movements, like the cause of the movement, what did the students did in the movement, the respond from the government, the output it gets from the movement, and etc.
You can explain more about the 2019 Student Protest “Fees Must Fall” remembering that your Wiki topic mainly discusses on this issue. So that, it will help the readers know more about the discussed issue.
The whole article is good. But, make sure there are no misspelled words or numbers.

Here is some feedback

- make sure you check spelling errors - you could really include some more detail in some areas, as mentioned above - your article is a good read and its coming along nicely, well done!

- CDB2003 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.246.2.67 (talk) 22:22, 6 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

My Response of the reviews : Thank you for providing your feedback. I would highly consider it and look for the other students' work in order to make my article better. I would also check for the spelling error. I would also add few sections after reading and finding more sources and articles.