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Your submission at Articles for creation: Travis Mills (director) (May 18)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by HenryTemplo was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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HenryTemplo (talk) 15:04, 18 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi HenryTemplo - Thank you for the feedback and my apologies for the rookie mistakes. I've been doing more learning about the issues and can do better on the upcoming edits. :) FunnyPuffin (talk) 15:49, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's great to hear, good luck with your future editing! Have a great day! HenryTemplo (talk) 15:54, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've completed all the corrections you requested and have re-submitted the page for your thoughts. Thank you! FunnyPuffin (talk) 19:18, 10 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, FunnyPuffin! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! HenryTemplo (talk) 15:04, 18 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Travis Mills (director) (July 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Missvain was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Hi. Please replace all primary sources with reliable secondary sources or remove the statements that can't be cited. For example, we cannot use Amazon as a citation. Thank you! If you have any questions please ask them at WP:TEAHOUSE.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Missvain (talk) 22:11, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the editing feedback! I'm so sorry about the YouTube and Amazon links. I was trying to provide links where you could watch the movies, but I can now see how that comes across as a citation. I will fix that and go through the other citations as well. FunnyPuffin (talk) 22:04, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Travis Mills (director) (October 15)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by S0091 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please see the the notability guidelines for directors. It does not appear any of his films are notable and generally multiple notable works are required along with in-depth coverage about person by reliable sources. Also, none of the awards are from notable/major national or international film festivals or other notable bodies so are not useful for establishing notability. See also the notability guidelines for films.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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S0091 (talk) 18:02, 15 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I appreciate the feedback and I think that I finally understand what is being asked for regarding edits. I will revise the page to document notability from more reliable sources. FunnyPuffin (talk) 21:08, 17 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Start with articles about the films first. Unless the films can pass the notability guidelines, the filmmaker is highly unlikely to pass WP:NDIRECTOR. S0091 (talk) 21:13, 17 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Roger that! FunnyPuffin (talk) 21:46, 17 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Travis Mills (director) has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Travis Mills (director). Thanks! S0091 (talk) 21:40, 17 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Travis Mills (director)[edit]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 22:02, 19 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Travis Mills (director)[edit]

Hello, FunnyPuffin. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Travis Mills".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 21:41, 17 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]