User talk:Ggrcb
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Boston Wine Festival[edit]
URL: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Boston%20Wine%20Festival&oldid=323638060
1) The first sentence is confused. It could be better structured.→ ″The Boston Wine Festival, founded by Chef Daniel Bruce in 1989 is held annually at the Boston Harbor Hotel, is one of the nation's longest running wine and food pairing series.″
Suggestion: The Boston Wine Festival, founded in 1989 by Chef Daniel, is held annually at the Boston Harbor Hotel. The festival is one of the nation's longest running wine and food pairing series.
2) Needs to be updated→ We are in 2017 and the last ″Festival Anniversary″ celebrated 20 years in 2009. And also it could be more developed, because it seems that someone started writing but did not finished.