User talk:Gossipgirl123456
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:48, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
Kay Armatage[edit]
Major revisions needed. This is a good start! You have written a nice lead section. However, you need to fill out your draft before moving it to mainspace. IMDb is not a reliable source, so you need at least one and ideally two or more reliable and independent secondary sources. Add a References section heading before the footnotes. Fill out the Career and Personal Life sections with well-sourced relevant information. Chronophoto (talk) 16:03, 22 October 2019 (UTC)
Peer review:
Your article is very well done! you have gotten a strong amount of information about the film maker in order to contribute to the wikipedia article. Your content is great and you have provided wiki users with a great amount of helpful information in regards to this film maker. Your article does a great job at emphasizing the film makers feminist passions. There are a few small grammar changes that can be made as you polish your work eg: punctuation and taking out some extra fluff words. Also ensure that you avoid any writing that seems as if it may come from opinion by attributing statements to the person who made it. overall it is a very well done article! good job. Privacy1548 (talk) 16:00, 3 November 2019 (UTC)