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Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Dana Kupperman (June 22)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please do not start a biography of a living person by describing her as "award-winning". It makes it clear that the purpose of the draft is to praise the subject rather than describe her neutrally. The subject may be notable. It isn't clear from this draft whether she is notable. Better independent references are needed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:42, 22 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 16:49, 22 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Dana Kupperman (August 9)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SportingFlyer were:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

She likely passes WP:NAUTHOR since her book was reviewed in the Boston Globe and the New York Times, but the article can't be accepted until the references/in-line citations are cleaned up.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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SportingFlyer talk 09:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman[edit]

Hello, Grapkin. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. — JJMC89 (T·C) 07:19, 10 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]