User talk:H.hoangtn/sandbox

Good job at remaining objective throughout! I agree with Chloe, citations are well balanced and are all from good sources. You don't cite one too many times in comparison to others as well. I did notice a citation (first paragraph) with a space between to citations so be mindful of that. Also, it takes a while before you add a citation in the first paragraph. Most sentences should have a citation so you might need to add a few throughout. I really like that you added links to other wikipedia articles so the reader can get more info. Also you did a nice job at summarizing vocal hygiene and gave a nice list of therapies. Also nice explanation of botox injections. I agree that the surgery section should be lengthened if possible to make t more balanced. Also, I would simplify the terminology at the top of the article section, or provide an explanation for terms like "organic," "functional" and "psychogenic." Overall great job though, I enjoyed learning about treatment for dysphonia! Chrissietheslp (talk)