User talk:HH neuron/sandbox

Please use == instead of = for section headings, and consider if Gibbs energy cuts across several topics. Hagen76 (talk) 13:17, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You need an intro paragraph before the TOC. The first equation is not just for non-ionic surfactants. Remove caps on words like entropy. A single ref at the end of a paragraph is not sufficient; put refs on individual sentences. Figure resolution is too low; increase and save as .svg if you can. You need two more original figures. Add equation from dressed micelle article I gave you (total G = head + hydrophobic + interfacial). You are missing the data table. Suggestion: table with structures, CMCs, delta G, of surfactants. Be sure to get data from at least 3 sources for your table. This will also bring up the number of your references. Hagen76 (talk) 18:33, 29 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I tried to convert the image to .svg but it messed it up (turned the color to black), so unfortunately it doesn't get any better. -Sandra ChemistTree (talk) 06:57, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]