User talk:HannahW1414
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Wiki L&O Review[edit]
Hi HannahW1414! Nice job with your article edits. I have some feedback for your below. My name is Erin Larson, and I am a professor of environmental science and a founding member of WikiProject L&O.
The information about the evolutionary history of Planktivores is interesting but feels out of place as an introduction to Forms of Planktivory. Perhaps you could create a new section titled "Evolution of Planktivory" instead?
The Current Research and Scientific Work is interesting but feels like it could quickly become outdated. What if instead, you focus on the content of what that new research is studying and title that section something like "Management Applications"? I would also focus more on the findings and less on the actual researchers - e.g. currently the article states "In addition, the researchers found that climate change seemed to have a statistically significant affect on planktivorous fish regimes occurring in Lake Blanca Chica." -> perhaps change to "Climate change seemed to have a statistically significant affect on planktivorous fish regimes occurring in Lake Blanca Chica (insert citation)." Have other studies looked at this question elsewhere? Have they found similar or different climate change impacts?
If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. DrErinLarson (talk)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:14, 28 August 2020 (UTC)