User talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive 3

WU SHUHAN

My city editing has been completed. Please check it and I will listen to the advice given by the professor. WSH0927 (talk) 14:25, 2 December 2023 (UTC)

@WSH0927 For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article and link it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:31, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

ZHANGBINGYI

Hello professor, My Wikipedia has been modified and published successfully. Please check it, thank you. Tourism in Tibet Zhangzhang111 (talk) 10:51, 3 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello professor， I want to translate this Wikipedia article to get extra credits but I seem to have encountered difficulties. I hope the professor can give me some advice. Thank you. U.S. assistance defend Taiwan

This is a link to the Chinese wiki. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%BE%8E%E5%9B%BD%E5%8D%8F%E9%98%B2%E5%8F%B0%E6%B9%BE

Thank you！ Zhangzhang111 (talk) 06:09, 5 December 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 For extra credit you can chose another topic. You can talk to me after class during office hours for ideas or check User:Piotrus/Ideas for students _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 6 final draft :HUANG YIXIAO & XIAYIRONG

Hello professor

We have completed the group assignment on Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis course, please check Ma'anshan.

Thank you HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 06:47, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article and link it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:55, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 14: HAO JINGYU

Dear professor, I have read and commented on friend's homepage about Jianchuan, you for providing the link. Thankyou!

https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AJianchuan#Some_advice(HAO_JINGYU) 2019082315HAO JINGYU (talk) 09:20, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

@2019082315HAO JINGYU Good job starting that discussion! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:27, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5 DENGQIN AND LUSHU

Hello professor, we have corrected the errors in the article and moved it. Here is the link.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_legend_era#Historical_research。 We also fixed errors in translating English into Chinese.Below is the link, https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%AE%89%E6%9D%B1%E5%B0%BC%C2%B7%E7%B4%80%E7%99%BB%E6%96%AF please take a look.Thank you. Dengqin11 (talk) 05:33, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 I am afraid that as I said last time, "Much of the content you have added sadly seems unreferenced." You have added some references but many more are needed. They are also badly formatted. Only your reference number 2 is correct. This needs to be addressed. When linking to a topic that exists on Chinese but not English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link. Also, please connect your article to the Chinese one by using the "Add interlanguage links" link from the right menu and add relevant WP:CATEGORIES (see bottom of Chinese article for Chinese categories and find closest equivalents in English). Stop by my office hours if you need help. Please note that you should move the article back to your sandbox, it is not ready for publication now, and it may be deleted if you don't fix the issues soon or return it back to your draftspace. Please do not publish your drafts until I tell you they are ready for publication. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:45, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello professor, I have moved the article back to the sandbox and modified the red part of the link, please check it again, thank you.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dengqin11/Chinese_legend_era Dengqin11 (talk) 05:13, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 I am afraid I do not see any substantial improvement. Most of the article is still unreferenced or referenced to low quality sources. As I said earlier, I recommend you chose a different topic. The original Chinese article is unfortunately so bad you would effectively need to write a new one from scratch. Instead of translating something from Chinse to English you can also instead chose two topics to translate from English to Chinse. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:45, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

Dengqin:wikivoyage

Hello professor, I have modified and completed the wikivoyage tour about Nanchong according to your modification suggestion. Please review it again. Thank you. Here are the links：https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Nanchong Dengqin11 (talk) 04:38, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11Good. There is a big table of Scenic spots that needs to be converted into regular listings. After you fix this, for the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article and link it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:47, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

Wiki edits: XU RUOCI

Hi Dear Professor, I made some edits on Wikivoyage of the article ‘Guangyuan’. And I fixed the translation problem of Thousand-Buddha cliff statue (千佛崖摩崖造像). Please check them~ Thank you~ Roci xu (talk) 09:15, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Good progress _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:47, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

wikivoyage GENG JIAYI

Hello professor I made 80 edits in wiki voyage, you can check it out, thank you jiaaaay 14:19, 14 December 2023 (UTC)

@Jiaaaay Good. Please try to reply to the question at User talk:Jiaaaay – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:52, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

Wiki：ZHANGBINGYI

I have already completed the Wikipedia article and I asked the professor for advice in the office that day. I hope the professor will add points after confirmation.U.S. assistance defend Taiwan

Thank you！ Zhangzhang111 (talk) 10:18, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Regarding your article (now at Draft:U.S. assistance defend Taiwan, I am afraid the fixes are not sufficient, which is why your article has been moved back to draft with the comment "move to draftspace (WP:DRAFTIFY): was moved back to articlespace without resolving any of the issues prresented in the AfD". Please read the comments at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/U.S. assistance defend Taiwan and tell me how you addressed the issues raised there? I see the article still from language/grammar/vocabulary issues, making numerous sentences confusing or jarring. There are still references that are not formatted properly (missing author, date, or publisher).

If you think fixing those issues is too difficult, note that partial credit has already been awarded for your attempt to translate this, and you can get extra credit by choosing to translate some simpler topics (you can also translate content from English to Chinese Wikipedia). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:25, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

WU SHUAHN

Hello, Professor. I have revised and published my Wikipedia article: Luo yusheng. Please check and make suggestions. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 15:20, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Good. Please use the "Add interlanguage links" tool on the right side of the article(s) to link it to the original and add appropriate WP:CATEGORIES (look at the bottom of the original article and locate relevant similar categories on the target Wikipedia). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:26, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

LIHAOCHANG&LINZIYU

Hello professor. I modified the question as you suggested:

1. The map has now been adjusted

2. History and climate have also been added

3. Added more positioning and location information.

4. We added some new things according to Anshan

Please check

personal:

I have completed 160 edits, please check it with the teacher. Lihaochang666 (talk) 14:53, 16 December 2023 (UTC)

@Lihaochang666 Good. For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article and link it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:29, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

Wiki - HUANG YIXIAO

Hello Professor

I've completed my second Chinese Wikipedia translation(Media Trends and Globalization course).

Actually , on December 7, I sent a message to the administrator to help with the move like my first article, but it was rejected. Then I made changes according to the administrator's request and submitted the application again, but I have been waiting and it has not been moved. I saw an autonomous movement button this morning. Then moved to main space by myself .

Please check it or have any tips for me. HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 01:17, 16 December 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Good progress, but I see that your work has been returned to draft for further improvement at zh:Draft:麦哲伦探险队 . Please address the issues raised by the Chinese reviewers and let me know when you do so. If you need further explanation, please ask the Chinese reviewers for more feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:28, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello Professor

I changed it again as per the admin's suggestion and submitted it.�here HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 02:02, 18 December 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO It seems further improvement is needed - please keep trying. You can ask the experienced Chinese reviewers who left you messages there for more advice. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:14, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Wiki Assignment (Darlene Audrey)

Dear professor, me and my teammate, Kim Minji have already improving the Indonesia-South Korea relations article. Please let us know if there any deficiencies that can be corrected. Any feedback and comment would be appreciated. Thank You! Darleneaudrey (talk) 14:53, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey That's good progress but you need to add proper references. Right now you have added external links improperly. Please read the following guidelines and how-to: Wikipedia:External links, Help:Footnotes and watch our LMS vidoes on how to add properly formatted footnotes.

To ensure you get full credit, it would be good to add more content. Or alternatively you can chose some short article to translate from Indonesian to English Wikipedia for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:50, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

Dear professor, i already try to fix the references, you can check it in here. and i also translate some short article from Indonesian to English Wikipedia, please check it in here. Thank You! Darleneaudrey (talk) 19:38, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey The references should be in the form of WP:FOOTNOTES not Wikipedia:External links. Please keep trying - watch our LMS video on adding references if you have technical trouble. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:16, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Summary of edit times:YANGPEIFU

Dear professor, below is my summary:

484 edits (wiki voyage). 82 edits (Wikipedia)

Both articles selected by Wikipedia have been reviewed. Wikivoyage articles have also been improved according to the areas discussed by the reviewers and the professors. Please check it, thank you~

Thank you, Professor! See you next semester! Yangpeifu (talk) 09:22, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:16, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

SU YIQI

Dear professor,

I have finished my homework and editing tasks this semester. Please check it.Thank you

SU YIQI (talk) 11:33, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

@SU YIQI Well done, grades will be posted shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:17, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

wikivoyage：Enshi （ZHANG KUN & CHENG TANWEN）

Hello professor, we have completed the wikivoyage about Enshi according to your modification suggestion. Please check it . Thank you. ZHANG KUN0305 (talk) 13:12, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG KUN0305 The 'understand' section could use a short, one paragraph entry on history. For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article and link it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Final ： LI YULUN & HAO JINGYU group10（Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis）

Hello Professor, this is the final wiki tour guide assignment for our group, please check if it is correct, thank you.

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Ya%27an LIYULUN (talk) 01:36, 20 December 2023 (UTC)

@LIYULUN Well done. For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article and link it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Extra editing：LI YULUN（Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis）

Hi Professor, here are my extra weekly edits for this term, please check them, thanks!

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/LIYULUN LIYULUN (talk) 03:05, 20 December 2023 (UTC)

@LIYULUN Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:19, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Wiki edits: ZHANG KUN（Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis）

Hello professor, this is my extra weekly editor, and I edited four places.

(Tengzhou,Shangqiu,Weihai,Jingdezhen)

Sorry for the late message, please check it, thank you! ZHANG KUN0305 (talk) 04:57, 20 December 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG KUN0305 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:19, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Extra editing：HAO JINGYU（Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis）

Dear Professor, I have finished my weekly editing.Please check, thank you!

https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Ya%27an&action=history

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Dazhou 2019082315HAO JINGYU (talk) 06:59, 21 December 2023 (UTC)

@2019082315HAO JINGYU Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:19, 23 December 2023 (UTC)