User talk:Hiwakariitsumo1901

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Speedy deletion nomination of User:Hiwakariitsumo1901/sandbox

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A tag has been placed on User:Hiwakariitsumo1901/sandbox, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Dear, AntiDionysius.

Good morning. I hope this email finds you well.

The page and information that I created based on the truthful and did not violate any organizations or individuals. I want to retrieve the deleted material of the page that I created and the person that I wrote on Wikipedia is a person being known but have not list on Wikipedia and that's why I'm listing them. So please, retrieve my deleted material and list it on public.

Thank You

Sincerely,

Hiwakari Itsumo. Hiwakariitsumo1901 (talk) 16:15, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm Deb. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you.

Hello, Hiwakariitsumo1901. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
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avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see Wikipedia:Spam § External link spamming);
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you.Deb (talk) 15:33, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dear, Deb

Good morning Deb. I hope this email finds you well.

Thank you for your concern!

I want to admit that I don't have the external relationship with the person that I wrote. This person is a being known but have not list in Wikipedia and I'm listing this person on Wikipedia.

Thank You

Sincerely,

Hiwakari Itsumo Hiwakariitsumo1901 (talk) 16:00, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi; the issue with your page was that it was written in a non-neutral manner, appearing to be designed to praise and promote the subject rather than objectively describe it. That's why it was deleted; please don't just re-create deleted material in exactly the same format it was when it was deleted, since that deletion occurred for a reason. AntiDionysius (talk) 16:21, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

If you think someone is notable enough to have a Wikipedia page about them, I would encourage you to go through the Articles for Creation process. You can get feedback there on how to craft a page suitable for Wikipedia. Such a page will need to be written in a neutral tone, as mentioned; it will also need to be based on reliable, independent sources, cited in the article, and those sources will need to establish that the subject is truly notable enough to be written about. AntiDionysius (talk) 16:23, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi.

I want to know to make a Wikipedia page about them and make it list on public.

Thank You

Sincerely,

Hiwakari Itsumo Hiwakariitsumo1901 (talk) 16:36, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

As I said, the Articles for Creation process provides lots of advice and a venue for feedback on draft articles. I would advise using it. You might also find this guide to creating your first article useful. AntiDionysius (talk) 16:40, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I created a page in draft and when they give the feedback and advices on my article. Will it go public?

Thank You

Sincerely,

Hiwakari Itsumo Hiwakariitsumo1901 (talk) 21:37, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You haven't requested feedback on your draft; you need to do that before anything will happen. When you do that, an editor will look the draft. If it's ready, they will move it out of draftspace and it will indeed become part of Wikipedia generally. If it isn't, they'll tell you what the problem is and how it needs to be improved before it can be accepted.

I can tell you now, though, your draft is almost certain to be rejected in its current form; you have not changed it from how it was when it was deleted. It continues to be promotional in tone and, perhaps more crucially, it does not have any sources.

I urge you once again to read the "Your first article" guide. AntiDionysius (talk) 21:58, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I will change the tone of it. How long will it take for my page to go public?

Thank You

Sincerely,

Hiwakari Itsumo Hiwakariitsumo1901 (talk) 22:04, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Once you submit a version of it that meets the requirements, it can take any amount of time up to a week; usually it's less than a day, though. So it's dependent on how long it will take you to alter the tone and add sources. Is there a particular reason you'd like it to go up soon? AntiDionysius (talk) 22:06, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of User:Hiwakariitsumo1901/sandbox

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A tag has been placed on User:Hiwakariitsumo1901/sandbox, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. AntiDionysius (talk) 16:19, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tran Phat Loc (December 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tran Phat Loc and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

KylieTastic (talk) 22:46, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,

I don't know why my article being declined. This person is well known but never appear in any sources. That's why I want to list him in Wikipedia then there will be sources and news about him. I want people know them first and about the other things. May I request Wikipedia fix the words and promotional tone that I used, so my article can go to public?

Thank You

Sincerely,

Hiwakari Itsumo Hiwakariitsumo1901 (talk) 11:05, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Hiwakariitsumo1901! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KylieTastic (talk) 22:46, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,

I don't know why my article being declined. This person is well known but never appear in any sources. That's why I want to list him in Wikipedia then there will be sources and news about him. I want people know them first and about the other things. May I request Wikipedia fix the words and promotional tone that I used, so my article can go to public?

Thank You

Sincerely,

Hiwakari Itsumo Hiwakariitsumo1901 (talk) 11:05, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This draft was declined, and has now been deleted, because it was promotional. Not only that, but it was completely unreferenced, which is wholly unacceptable. My advice to you is not to recreate this again, as it will only be deleted, and you may be sanctioned for promotional editing.

For future reference, you must not just write what you want, or what you think you know, about a subject. You must summarise what reliable and independent sources have previously said about it, and cite those sources as you go, so that the information can be verified. This is true of any article, and especially articles on living people (WP:BLP). -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:02, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Tran Phat Loc has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Tran Phat Loc. Thanks! DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Tran Phat Loc

If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.
You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.

A tag has been placed on Draft:Tran Phat Loc, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]