User talk:Hquesada22
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I found the history part of the article bias. It was a bias as to why using and smoking tobacco is terrible,making Tobacco 21 campaign essential. I felt the article more so explaining and convincing what was bad about smoking rather than actual facts about Tobacco 21 campaign --Hquesada22 (talk) 05:33, 8 February 2019 (UTC)
The History of part could use more information on Preventing Tobacco Addiction Foundation.The history of the founders the nonprofit organization and their drive to create the nonprofit. And also the steps that led up to funding and making the Tobacco 21 campaign. --Hquesada22 (talk) 05:33, 8 February 2019 (UTC)
The mission statement focused more on the negativity of the use of tobacco and its causes and the effects, rather than the mission/vision of the end goal, and action done by Tobacco 21 campaign. --Hquesada22 (talk) 05:33, 8 February 2019 (UTC)
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