User talk:Iamastudent/sandbox

Rather than "anxious, depressed, or psychologically impaired people," it might be more professional to say "people with anxiety, depression, and psychological impairments."

MUpsych (talk) 14:32, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Change the headings by putting == at the start and end of headings like "New Work" and "Sources." This will make them bigger. See below example:

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Add links to key items and persons, such as Aaron Beck and Cognitive Therapy of Depression.

Aaron Beck at the end has an extra 'a': "Aaaron Beck"

Examples could be expanded, besides the cheating example. My suggestions: - Feeling down on a rainy day and concluding: "I have seasonal depression." - Being late to work one day and concluding: "My boss will fire me."

"Sources" could be changed to "References"; it's more standard.

The title "New Work" is ambiguous--could be changed to "Research" or "Definition."

MUpsych (talk) 14:40, 25 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]