User talk:Icherishyou/sandbox
Hi, Ella. I think your translation is very smooth and organized. There are a lot of sections that are clearly labeled. The length and the phrasing of the sentences are very professional and formal but also understandable for the users. I just have one concern which is what is the subject of this sentence "[46][47] is positive"? Pluto desdemona 134340 (talk) 06:44, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
Hi, Ella. Your article is very informative and the organization of your sentences is very good. One suggestion is that I like the format of your 1st article translation better because there are clear categories. If you are reformatting it I think it will be very helpful. Pluto desdemona 134340 (talk) 04:26, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
Hi Ella, I like your article translation and I can also witness your effort. The article is very long to translate and you did such a great job that it is very smooth and easy to understand. However, one change that can be done is that your second article translation's format makes it harder to read. You should incorporate Head or subheading in your format to enable a better reading experience. Jojo11234 (talk) 05:17, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
Hi Ella for the blog, I think this is a very deep reflection on the blog and this semester and this person also answers the prompt really well. Pluto desdemona 134340 (talk) 00:58, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
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