User talk:JackGolio
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JackGolio, you are invited to the Teahouse![edit]
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:46, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
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Peer Review[edit]
Your Wikipedia page is excellent with how in-depth you went into William Braithwaite's life. I really liked the amount of information you provided the audience about some of the accolades William obtained throughout his career. It was an interesting touch because I did not know how much he has written throughout his life, and it is astonishing that he contributed much to poetry and fictional writing. You can possibly improve the impact he had brought to the publishing companies because I think other readers would want to know more about what else he did while working with that specific company. But other than that the information is very spot on and completely unbiased. This looks like a great Wikipedia page and I am excited to see the information that will be added in the future. Great job! Andresleogaona (talk) 17:58, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
Hey! This is an amazing article! You have provided readers with a lot of information. I really love the "Works" section of the article, in particular, there are a lot of readings that I didn't know about. Overall, I would suggest changing the order of the article a little, try putting the "Personal Life" section at the beginning of the article before the "Career" section. It would make it a lot easier to read given that that section talks about his early years. The lead is also good, it lays out the article well and I have a great sense of what to expect. This is a great start! Yasmiiine (talk) 18:52, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
There were some nice details added that aided in expanding the Wikipedia article, but I believe lots more can be done. Some suggestions are to add a citation in the Lead section and in the Professorship and retirement paragraph. Additionally, the Harlem Renaissance section could be expanded identifying which poets Braithwaite had an impact on. Lastly, the sections could be reordered in a more chronological fashion, so it is easier to navigate. Good luck! Btymoniewicz (talk) 19:07, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
December 2020[edit]
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