User talk:Jasonchen149
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:35, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
Copying material[edit]
Hi - I received a notification that you'd used a large chunk of content from an external source. I wanted to give you a head's up as this website's copyright isn't compatible with Wikipedia's. It uses a copyright that allows users to adapt and share the work, but only for non-commercial purposes. This clashes with Wikipedia's license, which does allow people to use it for commercial purposes. Anything that has 'NC' on the license will automatically be incompatible with Wikipedia. I did do a quick search to see if the Basel II content was out there under a compatible license, but it looks like the official website itself doesn't allow its material to be used for commercial purposes, so this will always be an issue. My recommendation here is that you re-write this content in your own words, as there's not going to be a free alternative that you can use. This isn't something that you'd have been aware of to start with, to be honest.
Now one thing I do have to caution you on - this looks like it's going to be for a main page on operational risk. Keep in mind that since there are already pages on many of the types of risk you have on your draft, you don't have to go into too much detail about what these types of risk are. Since the page will be about operational risk, these other elements (including external fraud) should really only be covered as it applies to operational risk. So for example, business risk is the risks that stem from your business decisions while operational risk is the risk that stems from your team trying to carry out said decisions. The two are distinctly separate and can interact with one another, but they're not really the same thing and business risk isn't a part of operational risk, although it can impact it. How you need to be writing about this is something along the lines of "Business risk can impact operational risk, as a company may choose to change how their team carries out a decision based on the new information that would impact its long term success." It's a rough sentence, but it should get the general idea across.
One thing I'd recommend would be, since you're going to be adding to the main article on operational risk, to copy the article to the draftspace or your sandbox so you can see how these additions would fit into the main article and ensure that it has the same writing style. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:00, 20 December 2018 (UTC)