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Your submission at Articles for creation: Andy Saunders (November 17)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Novo Tape was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Reads like advertisement or resume. The quote from Nat Geo needs to be trimmed and there needs to be less WP:PUFFERY.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Sincerely, Novo Tape (She/Her)^{My Talk Page} 17:25, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, JaymoA! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sincerely, Novo Tape (She/Her)^{My Talk Page} 17:25, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much for looking over my article and giving feedback so quickly. On looking at it, it was a but puffery. I've stripped it back now and removed some elements that didn't have clear references. Hope it's better now. Thanks again. James JaymoA (talk) 23:39, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andy Saunders (November 17)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from https://www.apolloremastered.com/bio. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Andy Saunders may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 23:43, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, thanks for reviewing. I did get some of the detail from the authors bio. I’ll rephrase it now. Thanks for reviewing. JaymoA (talk) 23:56, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Andy Saunders has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Andy Saunders. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 18:43, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Please see Andy Saunders (author). It appears that these are different people, but I am not certain that they are different people. Please confirm. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:45, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Robert, yeah, they are different people. What’s the best way to differentiate them? Thanks for reviewing! James JaymoA (talk) 19:21, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andy Saunders (film restorer) has been accepted[edit]

Andy Saunders (film restorer), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Lopifalko (talk) 22:50, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]