User talk:Jennavdg
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:38, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
Overall great improvement! Just a few things I'll be nit-picky about: I would change Aztec mythology to Aztec religion, as we discussed in class. I'm also not sure about the word "fearsome". I'm not sure what substantiates it and worry how it can make the deity be viewed negatively. You could add a link to the Codex in the image caption. Where is the source for the second paragraph under Ritual? Brittany N. Clarke (talk) 02:41, 9 October 2018 (UTC)