User talk:Jeremy0626/sandbox

Nicely organized article, with great illustrations! It needs some reworking, though, to focus on the Ethnolinguistic Vitality of the Heritage Korean in Toronto more clearly.

For example, can you relate the information you give in the section called "Struggle of Second Generation Koreans" to status for directly, so that it's part of the Ethnolingistic Vitality description? Also, make a more clear connection to status for the content you include under the "Current Status" section heading.

Since Wikipedia has a page for Korea, you could link to that, rather than providing the first paragraph of info that you do. (If their page is missing some important stuff that you found, edit it!)

You mention "the second wave" of KOR migration to Canada. When was that? Can you find info about the # of people who came to Toronto in that wave? That would be appropriate for the Demographics part of Ethnolingistic Vitality. Naomi TBB199 (talk) 20:53, 11 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]