User talk:Jetsetta14

Home furnishing franchise

I tagged this article for clean up yesterdaty. Please clean it up and make sure it no longer sounds like an advertisement, or I will have to nominate it for deletion. Thank You. ThuranX 03:25, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Although you have improved the article somewhat, It should NOT include the commercial links, nor the list of specific company start dates, but should discuss the topic of furnishing franchises. In order to help, I have removed such sections, and ask that you further work on the article in terms of the topic of HFFs, not the specific chains. ThuranX 21:45, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Frnakly, I'm not sure that it should, and you should note that the article has a number of 'citation needed' tags throughout it. However, pointing to a C- student and using that to validate your own C- isn't ever a good plan in life. (This is an example, a metaphor, not a personal attack). I suggest again that you focus on the development of the market for this sort of store to fill the demand of. That article does, however, give some idea of the rise of the industry by showing that one guy opened a store, then opened the warehouse store later, and then other companies copied it. It's bare bones there, but still present. ThuranX 21:28, 2 February 2007 (UTC)