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Four Seasons Hotel Buenos Aires

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Four_Seasons_Hotel_Buenos_Aires

History: The author first talked about its current condition, then backed to its origin in 1920s, and finally in the second paragraph back to 2006. Recommendation: Firstly states its history in 1920. Secondly describe current condition. At last, states its award.

Hotel Restoration: The passage directly starts to introduce the background of the architects who restored the hotel. Recommendation: Add an opening sentence to introduce the background of hotel restoration. For example, The hotel was restored in XXX by XXX and XXX.