User talk:Jkropinova/sandbox

Hi Julia, I think your article is coming along quite well. You've addressed a lot of interesting information that kept me invested in reading. You seem to have covered everything really well. All I would suggest is maybe that you split your themes sections based on the Nessos Painter's possible influences and the artist's progression and development seen in their work. Also, adding more examples at the end of your article can't hurt, though I'm sure you have more planned, as I'm seeing a work in progress. Other than that, it seems like you're doing great! Good luck! Rachelesanders (talk) 06:27, 19 November 2017 (UTC)Rachel Sanders