User talk:Jm runs
JM, Welcome to Wikipedia!!!
I saw your series of edits to the article G-string and wanted to offer some feedback:
- First of all, great edits overall! I hope you'll continue to be around and edit, add, etc. this and other articles.
- I adjusted a few lines of yours to make them more neutral-sounding. While it may be true that thong-wear attitudes are changing "for the better", this is called a Point of View (POV) in Wiki because some may think that and others may thing the opposite. In this instance, I changed it to read "toward more acceptance of" thong wear, which is what you were saying but has less of a "this is my view" sound to it. It's common and I have tended to do it a LOT before as well... (Read more at WP:NPOV - the official WikiPolicy on the matter.)
- A lot of what you added was Thong-related and not G-string-related, and that's great for now. Soon, Thong will have its own article separate from the g-string article, as they are different (as you pointed out as well). I hope that you will make a point to go and add to that article as well in the future.
Again, very well done. Minor things that you will learn as you spend more time editing Wikipedia... some of it all took me long enough!
Have a great day! VigilancePrime 23:31, 20 July 2007 (UTC)