User talk:Joypark98/sandbox
I think you did a good job of explaining your two topics. For the Ota Benga section you used "so-called" to introduce the African Pygmy tribe, which maybe could be changed since it gives off the illusion that it was not an actual tribe. There are some words that would show some type of bias such as "appealing" in the Japanese Concession section and "menacing" in Ota Benga's. Overall the labels were informative and gave a good description of two significant exhibits of the 1904 St. Louis World Fair.
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