User talk:Just8food/sandbox

Hey team,

Really good work so far. You have come a long way in unraveling the tangled mess that is the NU Graduate School!

You've done a lot of good research, and I think you've laid out most of it really well. Here are a few ideas:

You don't really mention how some programs are part of TGS, but others aren't e.g., MBA isn't but MORS PhD is... ideally, a "why" would be even better (e.g., are professional master's programs not part of TGS, but academic ones are?)
You only mention the addition of 1 time when additional degrees are added, but I assume the list of degrees has been changing constantly. Either put in more info about this, or get rid of the sentence about the one that was added.
You don't need the top header - just put the summary sentences at the top of the article (look at other WP articles for examples)
It's a bit confusing why you focus so much attention on the dual degree programs, etc. I'd maybe just change that into a paragraph describing the types of degrees offered...

Overall, this looks really good. At this point, if I were you, I'd do 2 things: First, send a draft of this to someone at TGS. Tell them you're working on improving their WP article, and want to make sure that you're representing it well. You could probably also ask them about which programs are/aren't included and why. Second, "Get Help" from Ian, our content expert at wikiedu. I'm sure he'd have some additional pointers.

Looking forward to seeing this on Wikipedia! Great work!

-- 16:09, 24 October 2016 (UTC)