User talk:Justpassinboy
April 2008[edit]
Welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to make constructive contributions to Wikipedia, at least one of your recent edits, such as the one you made to Pure Reason Revolution, did not appear to be constructive and has been reverted or removed. Please use the sandbox for any test edits you would like to make, and take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Dweller (talk) 11:50, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well, it's for your editorialising. You wrote:
It was mooted that maybe the manager doesn't try and screw this tour up by 'forgetting' to insure the instruments and by hiring a less-than-roadworthy van.
- That section of text is problematic in so many ways, I'm not quite sure where to begin, except, as you suggest, citing is an excellent way for you to begin. --Dweller (talk) 14:34, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- Super. --Dweller (talk) 14:54, 25 April 2008 (UTC)