User talk:Kathychen1

This user is a student editor in University_of_Washington/Technical_Writing_and_Communication_in_Chemical_Engineering_(Winter) .

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Peer Review (Tommy)[edit]

Lead Section

I am able to get a sense of what dispersions are from the lead. It is helpful having the difference between suspensions and colloids included, but it might be nice to also mention one or two examples of each in this section.

Structure

The article is sectioned reasonably and presents the information in a logical order.

Balance

Each section seems to contain an equal amount of information (assuming process of dispersion to be added later).

Neutral Content

Content appears to be unbiased

Reliable Sources

There is a good number of references so far from reputable sources.

Tyoo2 (talk) 14:34, 16 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Response to peer review: Thanks for your feedback! I will add some examples of dispersions in the lead section. Kathychen1 (talk) 04:29, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]