Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking or or by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your username and the date. Also, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field. Below are some useful links to facilitate your involvement. Happy editing! User:HopsonRoad 02:43, 14 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Kent, I see that you have made a variety of good-faith additions to the Permafrost article. Unfortunately, your "Fast facts about permafrost" don't really fit into the encyclopedic style and structure of Wikipedia's Manual of Style. I could suggest that you first study how to do references correctly at Wikipedia:Citation templates and provide in-line citations at their proper places, such that they show up as a superscript in the text and as references under the main reference section. Secondly, I suggest that you move your "Fast facts" lower in the page, since they aren't organized in a manner that helps introduce the topic. It's good to have the structure of the lead (first paragraph) reflect the order of the major sections. Also, before implementing a major change in an article, such as you have done, it's often helpful to announce your intention in the Talk page--sometimes with a mock-up of the final text. Have fun, helping with this article! I'll check in after a few weeks. You can leave any replies or questions here--I'll watch this page. Sincerely, User:HopsonRoad 02:55, 14 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, I'm Vsmith. I wanted to let you know that I removed one or more external links you added to the page Water resources, because they seemed to be inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page, or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. Vsmith (talk) 13:13, 8 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, I'm Vsmith. I wanted to let you know that I removed one or more external links you added to the page Water resources, because they seemed to be inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page, or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. Vsmith (talk) 13:13, 8 January 2016 (UTC)