User talk:Kezia7

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Speedy deletion of Chocolate bloom[edit]

A tag has been placed on Chocolate bloom, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G1 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to have no meaningful content or history, and the text is unsalvageably incoherent. If the page you created was a test, please use the sandbox for any other experiments you would like to do. Feel free to leave a message on my talk page if you have any questions about this.

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Chocolate bloom[edit]

Hi. I restored the article since it is not nonsense after all. My apologies for not researching it adequately. However, you need to do the following otherwise the article will most likely be deleted for other reasons:

Rewrite it in an impersonal encyclopedic manner. For example, the first sentence should read "Chocolate Bloom is the .....". You may want to look at the manual of style for tips on how to write the article.
I'm not saying it is, but the article reads like it has been copied from elsewhere. In which case we may be violating its copyright terms. If it is copied, please rewrite the article incorporating material from several sources.
You also need to find reliable secondary sources for the material in the article and use inline citations rather than a list of sources at the end of the article.
Finally, put the following tag {{underconstruction]] on top of the page. That way, hopefully, you'll get some time to work on the article.

Good luck and let me know if you have specific questions. Apologies again for the delete. --RegentsPark (My narrowboat) 18:41, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

My bad. I made a mistake in writing out the underconstruction tag. I've fixed it for you. Let me know if you need anything. --RegentsPark (My narrowboat) 22:15, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I reformatted the page so that it fits WP:MOS. Hopefully didn't mess anything up! --RegentsPark (My narrowboat) 11:24, 2 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I also inlined the McCarthy citation. You need to attach the remaining refs to specific statements in the text and need to specify the Seguine reference. --RegentsPark (My narrowboat) 13:39, 2 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Your recent edits[edit]

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