User talk:Kkaltenheuser

Why, hello lovely lady!Beckalinageorge (talk) 15:42, 10 September 2015 (UTC)

GREETINGS

Hi KKaltenheuser, I am so excited to collaborate on wikipedia with you and learn about global youth studies. Collaboration0826 (talk) 15:47, 10 September 2015 (UTC)

Feedback on article ideas

Hi, User:Kkaltenheuser! The transgender youth page could indeed use work, to carry on with what a student worked on last year. You would need to specify specifically what you would add. The Gay Straight Alliance page could use integration so it talks about GSAs without reverting to being a list by country. That could be very useful, too, especially for youth looking to start such organizations. What do you think?

edit on full citizenship at 21 was a helpful piece of information. Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 04:20, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

Article Ideas

Hello, Kkaltenheuser. In looking at the transgender youth page there isn't much that goes beyond a Western view of issues related to transgender youth. It would be interesting to see research you would do to find out more about acceptance of youth around the world. Both of your topics are becoming even bigger issues within the United States and so any edits you do would not only help the conversation happening here but also could put the issues in a bigger global context. Good luck!

GrebniewNeb (talk) 16:06, 19 September 2015 (UTC)

Your proposal

Hi, Kkaltenheuser, You have chosen a topic with much potential on an article that needs work. You have some precise ideas for improving the U.S. based content. Please be diligent in considering how to globalize the article.

Can you fix your programming on your user page so the article is correctly linked?

I do not yet have a sense of sources you have found on the topic. I look forward to reading the bibliography. As you post sources, please write a bit about what each source says and how it contributes to your potential revisions. What do you have, and what are you still looking for? Ideally, you could also inform a reader how the sources you end up with will shape the revision plans you mention in your proposal.

Onward! Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 04:14, 5 October 2015 (UTC)

Sources feedback

You have two sources listed. Please keep trying to find examples of how transgender youth are treated differently in different cultural contexts as well as sources about the topics you listed interest in in your proposal, "what health care is available (in depth presentation) and the ethics of that provision, along with the legal side that the youth would have to navigate in order to officially change their gender and name. Something else I would be interested in adding is information on homelessness and survival sex under the subheading of vulnerability; plus, there are some areas under vulnerability : suicide that can be updated with more current information."

Your sources as listed in your user page in the 10/10 version of your page were what I used to evaluate the quality of your sources. In this review of your sources, I was looking for 3-5 sources total, as well as the use of scholarly sources and the incorporation of global perspectives. Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 19:04, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review

One of the biggest suggestions I have is to not use the word "you" in this article. That takes away from the NPoV, it makes it sound personal to everyone. If you would like some help/suggestions for that, I am happy to help you with that. For the section of the US, I think it is important to add clarity to the term cisgender and link it to the Wikipedia page about it.

I love the idea of adding transgender youth leaders/activists with a little information on what they are doing.Sugarhearty (talk) 15:59, 12 November 2015 (UTC)