User talk:Kmcruz3

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Hello, Kmcruz3, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Thank you for the helpful resources, I appreciate it! Jjkoop (talk) 05:42, 9 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

Hey great gob so far! Try to add more details about how he started to help the kids. Also try to add about his early life and how he become successful- (Adoneyase Mehari) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adoneyase (talk • contribs) 17:03, 14 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking time to review the article, I made the recommended changes to the article. Jjkoop (talk) 05:40, 9 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments, we have discussed your comment and we added more to the article!

This looks great so far. The one thing I would add is since you talked about who the kids are going through things that he went through I would maybe mention his early life before that. I think it looks good so far and you guys have great information. Colin McGettigan (talk) 21:21, 14 October 2016 (UTC)Colin McGettigan[reply]

Thank you for taking time to review the article, I made the recommended changes to the article. Jjkoop (talk) 05:40, 9 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for commenting, we tried to incorporate more about his early life!

It looks pretty good[edit]

It looks pretty good! Try to dig up some of his early life. Also, see if you can find an estimation of how many kids he has help in Guatemala (if possible). And don't forget to add your citations. -Chukwuzulum Nwizu — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chukwuzulum Nwizu (talk • contribs) 17:44, 14 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking time to review the article, I made the recommended changes to the article. Jjkoop (talk) 05:41, 9 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]