User talk:Kreino1/sandbox

Sources[edit]

You only have one source so far. Also be sure to provide an actual MLA citation rather than a link to a database article - most WP readers wouldn't be able to access the link anyway. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:46, 21 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your second source isn't exactly relevant for the topic of the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 01:49, 14 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead[edit]

It's a good start. Here are my suggestions for revision: 1. Add a time period to the first sentence (the 1930s). 2. Delete "almost" from the phrase "almost violent nature." 3. A better opening sentence for the second paragraph would be, "The U.S. producer ... introduced Mexican horror films to an international audience."

Once you post the lead, you should also break up the article into several sections, such as "Early history" and "International Popularity."Josef Horáček (talk) 11:48, 26 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

You added the lead improperly. I fixed it for you. Josef Horáček (talk) 01:48, 14 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]