User talk:Kwasibandoh

This user is a student editor in University_of_Massachusetts,_Amherst/UNIV_190L_-_Demystifying_Library_Research_(Spring_2018) .

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Hello, Kwasibandoh, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:22, 14 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review 2[edit]

Lead Section: -This wikipedia page was very well organized and everything majorly important about your designer was listed immediately under the photograph.

- The lead section provides the most important relevant information.

Structure: - The page is structured well and follows an obvious pattern. You could include a section describing the personal life of your topic, this seems to be a common theme of other wikipedia pages that are similar to the nature of yours.

Balance: - I don't think any views are left out.

Neutral: The tone of the piece appeared to be neutral with no obvious bias.

Reliable Sources: -You could include more sources on your topic, although I know that may be difficult since you are doing a sort of biography and scholarly pieces on that subject matter may be difficult to find. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lpastorella (talk • contribs) 21:06, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]