User talk:Kyokoyama

Here is my link! [[1]] (Tiffanybn (talk) 04:34, 28 September 2011 (UTC))[reply]

So this is the assignment for week four; linking each others user page. [[2]] (Aspadoni206 (talk) 19:22, 24 September 2011 (UTC))[reply]

Hi Kelly! Just stopping to say hi and wondering if you are going to the Hawaii sushi dinner in October? Have a good day! Dlaborte (talk) 19:55, 15 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here is a link to my wikipedia page Nbarton10 (talk) 20:51, 25 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Hey, here is my list of ideas! [[3]] (Tiffanybn (talk) 23:49, 21 September 2011 (UTC))[reply]

Feedback - Week 4 Assignments[edit]

Hi Kelly, Nice job with edits to the page and in linking those ideas to my talk page (and your fellow group members' talk pages). In terms of feedback on the potential topics. Gerascophobia seems problematic from the standpoint of a non-existent literature (if I used gerontophobia there were 8 published articles - most quite dated). If you can't access reliable and valid information about the topic your ability to contribute will be limited. Both alogia and pica seem workable. Although there already is a decent structure present for both there also is a substantial literature that you should be able to consult to learn more about both and ultimately write about and share that knowledge in expanding the articles. Let me know how I can help along the way!Tatompki (talk) 20:31, 22 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback - Week 5 Assignments[edit]

Excellent work! You are really getting the hang of editing (including providing constructive suggestions on the talk page along with edit summaries), linking and referencing. You have earned full points for this assignment but I encourage you to look again at what is meant by reliable sources (i.e., when you write your article you will want to rely almost exclusively on peer-reviewed, published literature which can be found on the library website using EBSCOhost and/or PsycINFO). Hopefully your group is getting a bit closer to narrowing down to your topic? Let me know if you need any help! Tatompki (talk) 16:44, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Pica (disorder)[edit]

Are you planning on continuing with improvements? Or should I close the WP:GAN? The issue of referencing still needs addressing. Cheers Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 06:38, 14 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]