User talk:Laurendunegan/sandbox
Riane's Peer Review
[edit]Your article is solid. You provided a good coverage of the information needed. You also provided several different perspectives of groups of Pennsylvanians on the subject matter. The only criticism I have for your article is that your sources are not listed, making it impossible for me to confirm your information.
Janelle's Peer Review
[edit]I enjoyed the article. It was informational and concise. The only advice I would give is explaining your acronyms. (Ex: Pennsylvania Liquor Control Board (PLCB)) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jay.Darbs (talk • contribs) 14:23, 11 April 2018 (UTC)