User talk:Laurengonz3/sandbox
Prof Garcia's Comments[edit]
Week 2[edit]
Nicely done for this week, Lauren. Keep up the great work for the other assignments this semester. Alfgarciamora (talk) 20:38, 30 January 2017 (UTC)
@Alfgarciamora: Thank you Professor! Laurengonz3 (talk) 22:02, 30 January 2017 (UTC)
Week 8[edit]
You've done an exceptional job, Laurengonz3!! Great job with all your additions and details! I am so proud of you and your work. As you move forward, the one thing that I must emphasize is that your article needs citations! Lots of them! You need to put them almost at the end of every sentence, actually. So your page will not be fully finished until you add these citations (structured correctly in the Wikipedia style). Other than that, you just have to (1) make sure the language is encyclopedic, (2) your page is grammatically correct, and (3) that everything flows smoothly. Alfgarciamora (talk) 16:06, 20 March 2017 (UTC)