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I'm having trouble following what you're doing at this article. Lord knows it's a mess and could use a rewrite, but it seems to me that adding material that's just as strongly biased but in the other direction, and then removing the sources, makes the article worse, not better. The article needs to be rewritten to be neutral and fully sourced. It could use formatting help and wikification as well. -FisherQueen (talk · contribs) 12:51, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
- I'm really troubled; you're blanking the whole article, including the sources and the criticism, and replacing it with a promotional piece. Could you pause for a moment and look at WP:FIRST for some advice about writing your first article? -FisherQueen (talk · contribs) 12:53, 17 December 2008 (UTC)