User talk:Lunger21/sandbox

Primary Review

Currently, your article is missing some citations. I like your structure though so far, though I wish you had more technologies to feature. For methods, it might be helpful to use a numbered list or compare various methods of accomplishing the task perhaps? It would also be nice if you included some history or more about the usefulness of these technologies to modern medicine, etc. Sandrawolfe dreamcatcher (talk) 15:28, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

I agree with the previous comment made. The structure of the page seems to be slowly developing. I want to see what else will be included within this page. It would be nice to have several different examples of how your topic is used in real life similar to what you did for drug discoveries as well as the same subtopics for all of your smaller topics you plan to discuss. The history and future of the topic would be nice to include at the beginning and end respectively could also add a sort of timeline to your page. Perfect Majesty (talk) 15:40, 27 October 2022 (UTC)