User talk:Lynnw1234/sandbox

Jacolby Griffin Peer Review-Article is informative and contains good citations as well. You might want to dumb some of the words down because some of the readers are probably not going to be college educated. Length was also good. Might want to include a little more info on those in America sending money back and how it affected things.

Denton Greenway Peer Review-Article contains a good amount of resources and citations that helps add more depth to the article. Shows a lot that the page already has a table of contents set up for viewers to use. Besides finding some more information to add to the article, there is nothing else that needs to be added. Really good article.

Lynn: off to a strong start. I would think about adding an introduction, and maybe rethinking section headings to reflect their relationship to the main topic (IE causes for migration, etc.) One sentence: Mayans do not speak spanish is not always true. Some Maya speakers speak spanish, but I think you're trying to convey the idea that Maya communities often struggle in the because Latin American immigrants are assumed to speak Spanish, which is not always the case. Also, you'll want to be more careful with citing your sources. There are long stretches without attribution, and don't forget page #s to be specific. Cz17 (talk) 16:47, 3 November 2017 (UTC)