User talk:Makkie o
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:48, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
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Really liked the article it had a very neutral tone which is great for Wikipedia. It was very concise but still managed to be quite informative. Maybe consider adding some sort of media to your article as it is a pretty quick read as of right now (something to keep them engaged) and it also just looks good! A good idea could easily just be foods mainly eaten on the whole 30 diets. It would be nice to get a little more on the description, such as calorie counts if dieters will still need to be in deficits, drinks, any cheat meals as some diets do have etc. You had a good amount of references that were suitable for the piece and in general, it was a really good piece!
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Really enjoyed this! It was nice reading more in a town I didn't really know much about. It would be nice to get other information like a specific tradition to the town, something interesting the town is known for, or even famous people from the town. I also think you may need more references but I'm not sure. It would be nice to maybe consider adding some pictures too if you wanted. Overall it was a pretty enjoyable read and you did a great job giving details about the town in a neutral tone!