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reads like a resume and very poorly sourced.
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Firstly, there is an approved article in the Hebrew Wikipedia about Neheman.
In recent years there is a significant revolution in the field of Robotic Surgery in adults. Prof. Neheman is a leading in his field in the world in Robotic Surgery in children, and a pioneer in this field in Israel. These are revolutionary surgeries that changed children treatment.
In addition, Neheman was the first in the world to publish an article that includes over 100 children that were released to their homes in the same day of surgery.
Outpatient Robotic Surgery in Pediatric Urology: Assessment of Feasibility and Short-Term Safety:
Amos Neheman<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/?term=Neheman+A&cauthor_id=34854751> 1<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34854751/#full-view-affiliation-1>, Eyal Kord<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/?term=Kord+E&cauthor_id=34854751> 1<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34854751/#full-view-affiliation-1>, Brian A VanderBrink<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/?term=VanderBrink+BA&cauthor_id=34854751> 2<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34854751/#full-view-affiliation-2>, Eugene A Minevich<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/?term=Minevich+EA&cauthor_id=34854751> 2<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34854751/#full-view-affiliation-2>, Paul H Noh<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/?term=Noh+PH&cauthor_id=34854751> 3<https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34854751/#full-view-affiliation-3>
A multi-centered article on Israel's methods with the US, Prof. Neheman is the first author in this article. It was published in an Urology journal that is the second most important in the world and the most important in the US.
Aside to that article, Neheman has published new surgery techniques, published over 50 articles in world literature (here are links to his articles in PubMed and Google Scholar), is a lecturer in Tel Aviv University and in world-wide conferences, and is leading in the field of Children Urology in the State of Israel. Malishaked (talk) 09:14, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Malishaked!
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